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Both a candidate for owner AND an author? What else could a person ask for? My vote is yours for sure! :)

As for the book, you seem to have a lot of potential when it comes to writing. You should seriously consider continuing this book and having someone help you edit it! For simple grammar and pronunciation mistakes and such.

Whatever you choose, I wish you good luck.

Regards,

-Java
 

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Both a candidate for owner AND an author? What else could a person ask for? My vote is yours for sure! :)

As for the book, you seem to have a lot of potential when it comes to writing. You should seriously consider continuing this book and having someone help you edit it! For simple grammar and pronunciation mistakes and such.

Whatever you choose, I wish you good luck.

Regards,

-Java
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Yeah I use grammarly but Im not a premium user so i cant edit so of it.
 

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