Accepted Highway - Hard (Resubmission)

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  • /plot v Bunstop 14
  • Hard
  • 64 Jumps
so I took the advice from my rejection and added a service station, a ramp, and signs, and made the parkour use the whole build
 

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The Map Looks Good But im Kinda not Sure if its original or not.
Something about it annoys me but i don't know what.
But the Pk looks Good.
I Wish You Good Luck!
 

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The Map Looks Good But im Kinda not Sure if its original or not.
Something about it annoys me but i don't know what.
But the Pk looks Good.
I Wish You Good Luck!
I checked Shinx's list, there are some maps with roads in them but none that actually have "road" as the theme
I wish I knew what annoyed you about the map so I could fix it, but you couldn't pinpoint it :c

Thanks for the feedback c:
 

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I like this map, Bunstop! I tried your first submission, and you've really improved this one. The bridge is much cleaner, and using both sides is definitely a plus. The service station is nice too, although I feel like it's a bit out of place with the road being a different colour. I also feel like the ramp is a bit odd, and that it looks a bit more like a pedestrian pathway than a road. I think if you made all the roads the same style, it would add a lot of finality to the build.

Good luck!
 

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I like this map, Bunstop! I tried your first submission, and you've really improved this one. The bridge is much cleaner, and using both sides is definitely a plus. The service station is nice too, although I feel like it's a bit out of place with the road being a different colour. I also feel like the ramp is a bit odd, and that it looks a bit more like a pedestrian pathway than a road. I think if you made all the roads the same style, it would add a lot of finality to the build.

Good luck!
I've changed the walls to stone slabs on the ramp, like the rest of the roads have (and added supports to make it look more like a car ramp than a pedestrian ramp). I also changed the coal in the service station to the stone/andesite of the rest of the roads, and also made the border stone slabs instead of stone slabs and andesite

Thanks a lot for the really detailed review c:
 

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Hello Bunstop,

I am happy to tell you that your map is being accepted as a medium! The theme is original. The build has improved from your previous submission, and it is more attractive to look at. The parkour has also improved, as it is more integrated with the build. The jumps are varied; however, the map was better suited for the medium difficulty. I have nerfed a few jumps to help with the difficulty as well.

Thank you for submitting your map, I would love to see more submissions from you!
Have a nice day,
Kristina
 
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