Rejected PS4 Parkour

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Plot #: 3:-63
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34 jumps
About me: I'm just a boy playing streaming minecraft for fun. I'm trying to become better at parkour and building. So yeah!
 

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I'm giving this a -1.
Positives:
  • Jumps are varied so it does not feel repetitive
Negatives:
  • The theme is not original, there are already many many console and PC maps
  • the jumps pretty much don't interact with the build at all, they're all just floating
  • Floating jumps makes the map look messy
  • The build is not detailed enough,
Suggestions:
  • Make the build much better and clearly recognizable as a PS4
  • Make the jumps interact with the build for most, if not all of the course
  • Remove as many floating jumps as possible
Overall, the theme is not original enough, and for that reason I don't think this will be accepted, even if it is fixed. If I were you I would try a different, more original theme.

Good luck with your future maps, and I hope to see more submissions from you.
 

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Hey Mr_Gamer_Kid! Unfortunately I have to give this map a -1. Although as Dubinzi said, the jumps are varied, they also are a little too hard for an easy mode. The build itself could be better and it’s a bit messy. Either way, good luck!
 

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I'm also gonna give this a -1. The theme isn't original, and it seems like the PS4 is not the main focus. As Luci said, the build is messy. Believe me, I know the PS4 is oddly shaped, so it's hard to create, but be more careful and add more details, should you end up submitting another map in the future.

I wish you the best of luck! <3
 

Shinxray

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Hoi Mr_Gamer_Kid,
I'm gonna close your submission because I can't found your map, please resubmit with the good coords next time !
 
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